Friday, 28 August 2015


WALT write a recount in  another person's point of view.
                                       JENNIFER BRICKER
Jennifer Bricker was a child born with no legs.  She was found in a hospital up for adoption as a result of being abandoned by her real family.
That is when she was found by the Bricker family. The Bricker family had three boys and was happy they now had a baby girl.
When she was 7 years old she went on the tramp with her dad. After some goes she did a backflip .  From age 7 she was dominating tumbling  all because that one rule never say "I CAN'T ".
As well as being a champion she was also dominating in other sports eg Basketball and Baseball
You would think a person with no legs could do nothing well think again.
Jennifer was dominating all kind of things.
At the age of 16  out of  nowhere Jennifer asked her mother what her last name was.
She said that her last name would  have been Moceanu.
She knew what that meant that  Dominique Moceanu, the world champion tumbler, was her biological sister.
Jennifer sent her sister a letter which contained a picture and her adoption papers.
It all happened because that one rule "NEVER SAY I CAN'T".
               BY KATE MULCAY.

1 comment:

  1. Hello my name is alaana and im from tepapapa primary school.So i thought that ur writing could use some detail and some paragraphs that are backed up with alot of detail.But anyways amazing writing and i hope you do more work and publish it. Keep writing. :) :) :) :) :) :) :)